Can I get some honest critique/ opinions on this poem I wrote?

Very nice. I do have to agree with J: what is the "choking chapter"? This and the "want" described are a little vague... An emotional, spiritual, or material want? I like the idea of an annoying bird foraging for info & pushing the speaker's ons. It'd be cool if you could add to that idea even more! On a final note, I think the poem is very good without rhyme... the cadences might need to be edited in places, such as the repetition (And it's the want that keeps me going / It's that want that keeps me going) which is a bit awkwardly phrased.