Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Correct the following and comment?I enjoyed reading it, hope you will too?

Wow, your poems are good!! I think you should get yourself published, maybe send this poem into the local newspaper or create a blog online to showcase your work! You are very talented and this poem has potential. It only has very minor grammatical errors that can be easily fixed, and there are no spelling errors. I think that the poem is very mysterious because it is not specific and doesn't have much detail. It can either apply to someone a lot, or just be confusing to someone else because they won't understand its meaning. I understand its meaning and I like it. Keep up the great work! :)

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